Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, August 14, 2019
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Jasmine my name is Clio I am from Parkveiw Parua School. I love how you included lots of colour.Maybe next time try writing a description . It reminds me of when I had my first snow day.
ReplyDeleteHi Jasmine. i liked how you did lots of colour it makes it pops out. I liked how you did the sun. next time you should maybe write what the thing is about. are you happy with your calendar art.
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